I Have Long Forgotten

Your body is like an ocean like a waving cotton    Smile and give me the happiness I have long forgotten.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Salehi Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 12:48 PM
Ba Salam... Nicely expressed... beautiful... I just add the word field to the waving cotton. " a waving cotton field"...
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