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I Hate These Horrible Hate Poems

I hate these horrible hate poems the plate of life which I be knowing with haste let go so I start going a taste untasty displacing gurgling frustrate at mates I be showing fluctuating unflexed and flowing I hate these horrible hate poems

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Jan Allison

Date: 1/17/2021 1:43:00 PM

i dislike them too as i dislike pornographic poems which seem to be sneaking onto the site. you could write another poem based on this one and make it into a triolet form it has repeated lines! i think this poem would make a super triolet xx:-) hugs jan xx

Nick Trim
Date: 1/20/2021 11:50:00 AM

I did give this some thought Jan... I seem to hit writers block when attempting to pen those thoughts lol, I'm not entirely sure why but the brakes seem to squeeze down, you can have ago for now if you want and maybe in time i'll free the wheels and roll one out myself