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I Hate Romises

When you saw me sad you sat near me and ask why I told you if I can trust you, you promised you won't lie When you saw me crying you ask me why, and I say I want to die You promised, if we can be together, you'll never let me cry Days passed by when I realized that I love you I started panicking and ask myself what should I do My heart is not ready to fall in love with you But I can't stop loving so I'll just say what is true We become together when I told you my feelings You told and promised you won't stop loving And you also promised that you will avoid lying Hope it's all true so I'll stop worrying 5 months passed when I saw you walking Not just you, but you're with other girl, laughing I run away and start crying I whisper to myself "promise is the word of boys for lying"

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Date: 2/24/2011 5:54:00 PM
that last line needs some work. but it's a mouth full. i think its a great new quote. and i never thought of it though many girls and women have. "promise; is the word boy's use when lying." John Henry Loving III
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