I Hate My Life

I hate my life,
Because of all this
strife,
I just wanna take a
knife,
And end this life,
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 6:20 PM
hope not!!! but I liked the rhyme of it all. Congrats.
Allison Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 7:27 AM
oh very deep and dark an excellent write. many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Mehta Avatar
August 27, 2014 at 6:05 AM
Very strong feelings, DaQuan. congrats
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August 26, 2014 at 9:52 PM
DaQuan :) Congratulations! Thank you for supporting my under 5 lines or less contest. Enjoy my blog "One Hard Word" when and if you have time. Always ~ LINDA ~
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