I Hate, I Love

I hate the priest who holds my soul hostage
I hate the politician who exacts a heavy wage,

I hate God when He is silent in face of atrocity
when man kills man with atrocious monstrosity.

Oh, I love the sun, rising afresh in the east
tearing asunder the dark belly of the beast,

I love the innocent smile on the face of a child
and when the flowers bloom free in the wild.

Oh, how I love to hate a pompous ass
and yes, I hate to love a dumb lass!



~05/06/23
~Contest: Couplet Poetry
~Sponsor: Sotto Poet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 5/18/2023 11:17:00 AM
- A poem of truth... but may be "hard" on the eyes of the reader... congratulations... it made the winning list after all, Abdul :) -
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Abdul Malik
Date: 5/18/2023 12:59:00 PM
Yeah, I thought so too. But I had to speak my mind, and let the chips fall where they may!
Date: 5/14/2023 10:50:00 AM
Actually I understand about feeling God is silent. There are times I wish he would respond to my prayers. I just take it that it's all part of a bigger picture I will comprehend once I die.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 5/14/2023 3:42:00 PM
I have a big problem God being silent. Because of his silence, other people speak on his behalf. and you know what, "silence is admission of guilt!" I believe very strongly, when you die...you stay dead! there's no bigger picture than this.
Date: 5/14/2023 10:47:00 AM
I really liked this poem. I only wish you didn't hate God. Since all the evil happening is human based.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 5/14/2023 3:35:00 PM
You are wrong there. Human-based evil happens in the name of God!
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