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I Followed My Instincts

INITIAL SHOCK SANCTUM HUNGER TO RAGE her carotd pulse was beating slow and steady walking in place amongst the crowd CONCENTRATION she slipped into inert silence money and trouble to a casual observer a human knot closed around her PROTECTIVELY THEY KEPT LOOKING AT HER EVEN WHEN SHE RAN AWAY its possible their CONFABULATING-wishful thinking hoping to make it out alive suicide after a PROTRACTED ILLNESS left all alone to survive LIABILITY DENIED

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Date: 5/20/2009 9:52:00 AM
Hmm...nice job. makes me think. semi hard to grasp, but maybe ill understand after reading it a few times more <3 BooBoo
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