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I Fire Dance With the Stars

I'm strapped in a charred skin Preview live cremation The death of the sun star To end all creation I fire dance with the stars Thabang Jan Ngoma 08-07-2015 #2--union with higher self Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Contest Name: MYSTIQUE

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/28/2015 12:03:00 AM
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Awesome pen Thabang! Superb write n great win ! Big congrats!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/25/2015 6:54:00 PM
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congrats fine pen Thabang hugs
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/25/2015 7:46:00 PM
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Thanks Shadow...I recall submitting my poem for this contest...it was very instinctive...rgds, Tbang
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/25/2015 5:47:00 PM
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I firedance with the stars is a vision to ponder! Congrats on your win with this wonderfully unique entry!
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/25/2015 8:32:00 PM
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Hi Connie...thank you, it was trying to keep in line with the theme (:heers, Tbang
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Lee Carter
Date: 7/25/2015 5:20:00 PM
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Love your poem specially the last line congrats on your win ~lee
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/25/2015 8:46:00 PM
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Hi Lee...thank you, glad to know you loved this take (:heers, Tbang
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2015 5:07:00 PM
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Dropping back with my congrats Thabang:-) hugs Jan xx
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/25/2015 8:43:00 PM
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Morning Jan...thank you for being a constant source of warmth and light in my universe (:heers, Tbang
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Skat A
Date: 7/25/2015 3:15:00 PM
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Thbang, congrats on your win. SKAT
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/25/2015 8:48:00 PM
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Baie Dankie Skatie.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/25/2015 11:02:00 AM
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wowowow, for me this is one of the best. What imagination. Congrats for a win!
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/25/2015 8:38:00 PM
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Hi Andrea...means a lot coming from you, the entry was very instinctive, almost immediate. Glad you liked it (:heers, Tbang
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/7/2015 5:29:00 PM
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deep intense imagery Thabang - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/7/2015 5:42:00 PM
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Hi Jan...thank you, this work is experimental, I'm gonna need it...rgds, Tbang

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