Thabang Ngoma Poet Verse

I Fire Dance With the Stars

I'm strapped in a charred skin
Preview live cremation
The death of the sun star
To end all creation
I fire dance with the stars



Thabang Jan Ngoma
08-07-2015
#2--union with higher self

Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Contest Name: MYSTIQUE

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 28, 2015 at 12:03 AM Awesome pen Thabang! Superb write n great win ! Big congrats!

Shadow Hamilton July 25, 2015 at 6:54 PM congrats fine pen Thabang hugs Thabang Ngoma July 25, 2015 at 7:46 PM Thanks Shadow...I recall submitting my poem for this contest...it was very instinctive...rgds, Tbang

Connie Marcum Wong July 25, 2015 at 5:47 PM I firedance with the stars is a vision to ponder! Congrats on your win with this wonderfully unique entry! Thabang Ngoma July 25, 2015 at 8:32 PM Hi Connie...thank you, it was trying to keep in line with the theme (:heers, Tbang

Lee Carter July 25, 2015 at 5:20 PM Love your poem specially the last line congrats on your win ~lee Thabang Ngoma July 25, 2015 at 8:46 PM Hi Lee...thank you, glad to know you loved this take (:heers, Tbang

Jan Allison July 25, 2015 at 5:07 PM Dropping back with my congrats Thabang:-) hugs Jan xx Thabang Ngoma July 25, 2015 at 8:43 PM Morning Jan...thank you for being a constant source of warmth and light in my universe (:heers, Tbang

Skat A July 25, 2015 at 3:15 PM Thbang, congrats on your win. SKAT Thabang Ngoma July 25, 2015 at 8:48 PM Baie Dankie Skatie.

Andrea Dietrich July 25, 2015 at 11:02 AM wowowow, for me this is one of the best. What imagination. Congrats for a win! Thabang Ngoma July 25, 2015 at 8:38 PM Hi Andrea...means a lot coming from you, the entry was very instinctive, almost immediate. Glad you liked it (:heers, Tbang

Jan Allison July 7, 2015 at 5:29 PM deep intense imagery Thabang - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Thabang Ngoma July 7, 2015 at 5:42 PM Hi Jan...thank you, this work is experimental, I'm gonna need it...rgds, Tbang