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I Fire Dance With the Stars

I'm strapped in a charred skin Preview live cremation The death of the sun star To end all creation I fire dance with the stars Thabang Jan Ngoma 08-07-2015 #2--union with higher self Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Contest Name: MYSTIQUE

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/28/2015 12:03:00 AM

Awesome pen Thabang! Superb write n great win ! Big congrats!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/25/2015 6:54:00 PM

congrats fine pen Thabang hugs

Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/25/2015 7:46:00 PM

Thanks Shadow...I recall submitting my poem for this contest...it was very instinctive...rgds, Tbang

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/25/2015 5:47:00 PM

I firedance with the stars is a vision to ponder! Congrats on your win with this wonderfully unique entry!

Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/25/2015 8:32:00 PM

Hi Connie...thank you, it was trying to keep in line with the theme (:heers, Tbang

Lee Carter

Date: 7/25/2015 5:20:00 PM

Love your poem specially the last line congrats on your win ~lee

Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/25/2015 8:46:00 PM

Hi Lee...thank you, glad to know you loved this take (:heers, Tbang

Jan Allison

Date: 7/25/2015 5:07:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Thabang:-) hugs Jan xx

Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/25/2015 8:43:00 PM

Morning Jan...thank you for being a constant source of warmth and light in my universe (:heers, Tbang

Skat A

Date: 7/25/2015 3:15:00 PM

Thbang, congrats on your win. SKAT

Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/25/2015 8:48:00 PM

Baie Dankie Skatie.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2015 11:02:00 AM

wowowow, for me this is one of the best. What imagination. Congrats for a win!

Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/25/2015 8:38:00 PM

Hi Andrea...means a lot coming from you, the entry was very instinctive, almost immediate. Glad you liked it (:heers, Tbang

Jan Allison

Date: 7/7/2015 5:29:00 PM

deep intense imagery Thabang - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/7/2015 5:42:00 PM

Hi Jan...thank you, this work is experimental, I'm gonna need it...rgds, Tbang