I Finally Tried

Sea of waters
fire of flames
My thoughts start to ponder
When I see your name

Clouds of sky
Sky of light
The thought her is such a high
A feeling of right

Stars of the Moon
Moon in the sky
She will be mine soon
Even to my surprise

Lord of Heaven
Angels in the sky
I have loved her sence I was eleven 
Finally Im going to try

Heart of the soul
Blood in the veins
She makes me whole
takes away my pains


Beyond and Above
Little did I know
This wasn't so tough
The feelings are mutual, "Love"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 9, 2010 at 10:17 PM
if you just try hard enjogh we shall recieve are just reward lol,,, enjoyed..p.d.
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