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I Fell Asleep

It was so pretty The fresh countryside in bloom The daffodils out We drove in the sun We stopped for some refreshment We were having fun On the way back home Lulling vibrations caught me I soon fell asleep Just for a minute I swear it was only that! He thought I was rude Taking advantage The lemon cake and coffee Now sour and luke warm

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Date: 3/22/2010 8:41:00 AM
I am enjoying reading fresh poetry today. What a wonderful thing to do on this rainy day. I am so happy your poetry was among what I have read and enjoyed today Karen. Love, Carol
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