I Feel Something Great Coming My Way

A different vision seen 
than whats been known as my life	
I cant  explain the difference
or the thoughts crowding my mind…

I can't quit describe the feeling
or the way it soothed my nerve
like a weight has been lifted
and my prayer,  god has heard….

I can't find the words 
to put it in perspective
I am at lost for a description
for  another cant understand 
   how my life it is effecting.

I sit alone in silence	
although there are others in the room	
I am having fully concentrated on the conversation
only, Its only my mind debating on what I should do.

I shake from my thought
observe four of us in this man's house
not a word exchanged between any of us
but conversation proved us to be thinking too loud...........

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/16/2016 10:16:00 PM
Jessica, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
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Date: 5/14/2016 2:54:00 PM
Jessica, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem. ~Love LINDA~
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Date: 2/14/2012 11:57:00 PM
Wonderful poem Jessica, the thoughts crowding my mind sometimes to, and sometimes I sit alone and make filosofic thoughts in silence! Enjoyed it alot! oxoxo love Laila
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Date: 2/9/2011 11:52:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Jessica. I know this is a late welcome but, I have some very pressing matters going on at the present time. I hope to be back and at full speed in the next couple of weeks. Until then please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/5/2011 6:56:00 PM
I loved it, may many great things come your way
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