Falling Awake Poet Rhyme

I Feel Powerful When Birds Fly Away

I feel powerful when birds fly away,
I approach– they erupt!
My agency clear on display,
To my illusive control,
I’m amused they obey,
It’s time’s dualistic dance,
of predator and prey,
Self awakens through others,
All becomes One, as we play,
I’m imprinting the present,
When I walk out of my way,
A flock by emergence,
Patterns form, never to stay,
Co-creating a moment,
Spikes spice into my day,
I feel so powerful,
When birds fly away.

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Beata Agustin February 3, 2026 at 7:48 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Unseeking Seeker February 2, 2026 at 6:34 AM Fear drives them away, love brings them closer … Falling Awake February 2, 2026 at 5:31 PM interesting and true!... I am wondering what you drew from this? thanks for reading and sharing I appreciate you!