I Feel Lucky

patients arrive behind canes
scoot around in walkers
some are being pushed in wheelchairs

they look old, ancient, elderly to me
I hear them give their birthdates and I am shocked
Many are younger than I am

This makes me grateful
I may have arthritis in both ankles
but I can still walk in without help
I feel lucky
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Bauer Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 12:43 PM
yes you are! well said, caren!
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July 12, 2023 at 1:07 AM
thank you Ilene
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