I Feel Like

i feel like
i have done 
something wrong
that makes my 
dad not love me
or care about me

what have i done 
to deserve a dad
like the one i have?
nothing that i can recall
someone please tell me
becasue its driving me
crazy to know 
why i dont have a dad 
that really loves and cares about me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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July 7, 2008 at 4:31 PM
It makes me very sad to read that you feel your dad does not love or care about you. Maybe deep down inside he does, but just has trouble showing it for some reason. Keep writing and welcome to PoetrySoup. Love, Shar
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