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I Feel Every Bit of It

I have a heart and mind...
I feel what I see...
Trust me,I'm not blind!

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Liam Mcdaid

October 28, 2014 at 10:49 AM

powerful words beautifully written excellent pen saba

Saba Khan

November 22, 2014 at 10:25 AM

Thank you! Have a good day!

Sam Raj

June 9, 2014 at 4:20 AM

This is a very crisp to the point write. Enjoyed this confidence it projects, in confronting situations as a woman. I did view your other two liner. Wish to suggest you try Haikus and Tankas. Because you seem to enjoy short expressions. And I am sure you can do good. Perhaps you have already tried it? In that case ignore this. They are fun because of their structural constraints. Keep in touch

Saba Khan

June 11, 2014 at 3:47 AM

I like short,to the point but lines giving complete meaning..Thanku for visiting :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

June 9, 2014 at 4:08 AM

i love this simple poem but it speaks of volumes.. :D and the challenging remark 3rd line:D witty!

Saba Khan

June 11, 2014 at 3:45 AM

haha! :p thanks :)

Len Gasun

May 28, 2014 at 11:46 AM

A very powerful terse verse this is my dear friend Saba. I enjoyed so much the read. Thank u so much for sharing. Thank you so much as well for your precious time reading one of my poems. love and hugs, Leonoraa

Saba Khan

May 29, 2014 at 12:28 AM

You are more than welcome :) Thanks a lot for you kind words :)