I Feel

wind blows I feel 
your peace overcomes desire
telling me not to

spiritualhaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

January 1, 2014 at 4:06 PM

Gregory, you can only go with the flow, then decided... , I like your first poetic piece on the site, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Gregory Ramos

January 3, 2014 at 2:12 PM

thank you for the welcome

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 31, 2013 at 1:36 PM

- Welcome to P-Soup, Gregory ! - A good haiku, well done !! :)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a lovely day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Gregory Ramos

December 31, 2013 at 1:44 PM

thank you anne may you have a blessed new year

Skat A

December 31, 2013 at 10:06 AM

Gregory, a deep haiku....... It will be hard not to feel. Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Skat A

December 31, 2013 at 1:31 PM

Sidney LeeAnn M..... SKAT is a nickname I borrowed from my Poetic Sister.

Gregory Ramos

December 31, 2013 at 10:19 AM

thank you skat for your kind welcome , i am from san dimas ca a mechanic , veteran of the army , spent most of my time in germany 11 years . loved it there. i have been writing poetry since i was 12 and just latley fell in love with the haiku , and you skat is your name or nickname?

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