I Fall In a Love

I can feel the sky, I can feel the blue sky, I can perceive the birds On the sky, I can feel the floating clouds On the sky, Which making an illusion, A fairy land, I enchanted. I can feel the breeze, I can feel the gentle breeze, I can smell out, the mildness Of the flower Blowing with the breeze. To day all the things around me, I discover with a new look, A new sense, a new feeling which Making me smile. A new language for forgiveness, patience Which giving me a different identity And help me to maintain courtesy. All that I hate comes to an wonder. In my last eighteen years I never seen before. I want to forget all I hurt, I want to forget them me hurt, I want to begin with a new identity, Because I fall in a love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 8:37 PM
long time no see. Do you remember how much I liked the poem, ben reine ny hoie? I am having a contest for fave poems right now. Sure wish you would check it out. just put your name on that poem and enter it in my contest if you want to be on my winners list.
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 28, 2012 at 12:23 PM
Love can lift you to the highest mountain, or make you want to return to the depths of the earth if your love is rejected. As we grow we learn to manage the pain that often comes with love because loving someone far exceeds the pain. You have expressed these feelings in your poetry my friend and I wish you love. Blessings and Aloha, Connie
Andresen Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 2:52 PM
Happiness in life is to be two - enjoy love and life. - Have a lovely weekend in sunshine! - oxox Anne-Lise
Dey Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 10:04 PM
My dear poetess Anne, thank you for such a beautiful comment. Have a lovely weekend you too.
Kendrick Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 1:48 PM
Love makes one feel as if they are floating on a cloud..Great to be in love in the spring..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for the uplifting review of my work..Sara
Dey Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 10:02 PM
Oh my dear great poetess really i'm feeling happy and i'm grateful for your such a generous review.
Chircop Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 10:49 AM
Beautiful new language ,if only we could all practice it more.. We'll definitely be able to smell the scent of a flower,the blow of the breeze ,through our significant other.. Nice message-Charma
Dey Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 9:59 PM
Thank you for your generous comment and review.
Grisetti Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 10:39 AM
I hope you have found love, like in the poem. Nicely written and expressed.
Dey Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 10:44 AM
I'm overwhelmed that you have read this one and I'm grateful for your passionate feedback. Thank you with all my heart.
Edwards Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 10:19 AM
So lovely xx Hugs
Dey Avatar
March 23, 2012 at 10:20 AM
Thank you my dear poetess for your generous review.
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