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I Fall I Die

I fall Upon her lair Of breathless seduction. Although it seems to me quite quaint, I die

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Beata Agustin

Date: 11/20/2024 9:56:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/6/2016 8:11:00 PM

Benmosi Gomina, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/8/2016 8:48:00 PM

BENMOSI, well done on your poem, enjoyed reading today. *SKAT

Terry O'Leary

Date: 9/15/2012 7:29:00 PM

Very nice! Terry