I Fall I Die

I fall
Upon her lair
Of breathless seduction.
Although it seems to me quite 
quaint,
I die
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 9:56 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 6, 2016 at 8:11 PM
Benmosi Gomina, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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January 8, 2016 at 8:48 PM
BENMOSI, well done on your poem, enjoyed reading today. *SKAT
O'Leary Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 7:29 PM
Very nice! Terry
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