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I Faced This Man

I faced this man looking at me He said you’re handsome and cute Your face emits intelligent sparks You’re bold and flagrantly frank Voice vibrates with confident tunes You’re logical, at times tangentially crank Body speaks ego-leaning language You’re charismatic with urban elan Eyes encase dreams, at times tears You’re caring and adoringly magnetic You’ll soon meet your love Elated, I looked real close Saw this man in the mirror. June 23, 2021 Contest : Surprise Me Sponsor : Charles Messina

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Date: 7/5/2021 6:42:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... with "surprising ending" expressing your "poetic humor." God bless you.
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Date: 7/3/2021 9:05:00 AM
Subimal, this is one to remember. I've seen that man in the mirror before, but he changes faces every now and then (lol). Great write with a nice surpirse ending. Congratulations on your win! ~Charlie
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