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I Faced This Man

I faced this man looking at me 
He said you’re handsome and cute 
Your face emits intelligent sparks 
You’re bold and flagrantly frank 
Voice vibrates with confident tunes 
You’re logical, at times tangentially crank 
Body speaks ego-leaning language 
You’re charismatic with urban elan 
Eyes encase dreams, at times tears 
You’re caring and adoringly magnetic 
You’ll soon meet your love 
Elated, I looked real close 
Saw this man in the mirror.

June 23, 2021
Contest : Surprise Me 
Sponsor : Charles Messina

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 7/5/2021 6:42:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... with "surprising ending" expressing your "poetic humor." God bless you.
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Date: 7/3/2021 9:05:00 AM
Subimal, this is one to remember. I've seen that man in the mirror before, but he changes faces every now and then (lol). Great write with a nice surpirse ending. Congratulations on your win! ~Charlie
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