I EXPERIENCED SOMETHING

Is this a real situation 
Or my imagination 
Maybe it's a dream 
As real as it seems 

As dark as night
I see a bright light 
Drawing my body in
I'm moving but not walking

I feel light as a feather 
Trying to hold it together 
Am I leaving planet Earth 
And all of lifes worth 

I feel a comfortable warmth 
I feel fearless with hope
That to some degree
This is better for me

A voice appears in my head
Startling me they said
You're time is not Today 
Unfortunately you have to stay 

The Drawing force recoiled
I fall back to Earth's soil
As my dream broke
From my coma I woke
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Agustin Avatar
January 18, 2026 at 5:10 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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