Vladislav Raven Poet Rhyme

I Drown Within Your Eyes

I drown within your eyes divine, 
love shall ever make them brightly shine, 
your eyes shall ever sing love’s glory, 
ever a part of love’s own story.

Oh, my beloved, the love in your eyes, 
t does lead my heart to paradise, 
within your eyes, I see love’s dream, 
they shall, forever, shine supreme.

I drown in their song, 
in their wonder, I belong, 
swimming among such visions of love, 
your eyes lift my heart so high above.

The glory of your eyes as they gaze into mine, 
captivating, with a Heavenly shine, 
in my dreams, you shall ever be, 
your eyes shall ever bring Heaven to me.
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Panagiota Romios August 23, 2020 at 1:09 AM Who's, Mike~ this is so great. Eyes are indeed captivating Love your verses, Panagiota xx

Paul Callus March 23, 2020 at 9:13 AM Drowning within the eyes of your loved one...it can't get more romantic than that, Mike! Delightful! Best regards // paul Vladislav Raven March 23, 2020 at 12:16 PM Hi Paul, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. It is such a joy to drown within a woman's eyes, even if it is only in dream. Maybe one day I shall drown within these eyes for real, who knows. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike.

Harry Horsman March 22, 2020 at 10:05 PM Beautiful Poetry, Mike. really stirs the senses..love it. Vladislav Raven March 23, 2020 at 11:30 AM Hi Harry, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. It is so beautiful to drown within a pair of eyes. The heart is still singing as it chooses. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike.

Caren Krutsinger March 22, 2020 at 6:00 PM This is gorgeous imagery. It flows in a loving way. Vladislav Raven March 23, 2020 at 11:20 AM Hi Caren, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad that you liked the piece. There is such a beautiful feeling when looking into the eyes of a lady. One can drown within eyes divine. the heart is still singing. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Pandita Sietesantos March 22, 2020 at 5:56 PM Mike, you are such a magnificent romantic bard! This piece just flows seamlessly with loving words that shine brilliantly from the heart with the sweetness of love! Beautifully written! Love and hugs. Pandita Vladislav Raven March 23, 2020 at 10:58 AM Hi Pandita, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I always love letting the heart sing as it chooses. The love is always ready to flow and it flows in such gentle grace. Have a wonderful Monday. Love and Hugs....Mike. XX