I Drown Within Your Eyes

I drown within your eyes divine, 
love shall ever make them brightly shine, 
your eyes shall ever sing love’s glory, 
ever a part of love’s own story.

Oh, my beloved, the love in your eyes, 
t does lead my heart to paradise, 
within your eyes, I see love’s dream, 
they shall, forever, shine supreme.

I drown in their song, 
in their wonder, I belong, 
swimming among such visions of love, 
your eyes lift my heart so high above.

The glory of your eyes as they gaze into mine, 
captivating, with a Heavenly shine, 
in my dreams, you shall ever be, 
your eyes shall ever bring Heaven to me.
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 8/23/2020 1:09:00 AM
Who's, Mike~ this is so great. Eyes are indeed captivating Love your verses, Panagiota xx
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Date: 3/23/2020 9:13:00 AM
Drowning within the eyes of your loved one...it can't get more romantic than that, Mike! Delightful! Best regards // paul
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 3/23/2020 12:16:00 PM
Hi Paul, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. It is such a joy to drown within a woman's eyes, even if it is only in dream. Maybe one day I shall drown within these eyes for real, who knows. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike.
Date: 3/22/2020 10:05:00 PM
Beautiful Poetry, Mike. really stirs the senses..love it.
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 3/23/2020 11:30:00 AM
Hi Harry, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. It is so beautiful to drown within a pair of eyes. The heart is still singing as it chooses. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike.
Date: 3/22/2020 6:00:00 PM
This is gorgeous imagery. It flows in a loving way.
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 3/23/2020 11:20:00 AM
Hi Caren, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad that you liked the piece. There is such a beautiful feeling when looking into the eyes of a lady. One can drown within eyes divine. the heart is still singing. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 3/22/2020 5:56:00 PM
Mike, you are such a magnificent romantic bard! This piece just flows seamlessly with loving words that shine brilliantly from the heart with the sweetness of love! Beautifully written! Love and hugs. Pandita
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Date: 3/23/2020 10:58:00 AM
Hi Pandita, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I always love letting the heart sing as it chooses. The love is always ready to flow and it flows in such gentle grace. Have a wonderful Monday. Love and Hugs....Mike. XX
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