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I Dreamed a Dream 2

A chase thru the jungle ~ frightening calls Black Panther takes down~ sturdy wild boar Silence of forest~ a vicious death by jaws Warm scent of fresh blood~ a savory lick of the claws Hairs at attention ~ as I slipped passed and crawled Must get away~ gotta get away ~ shadowy Angels looked on Heart's racing faster ~ a dart in the dark Tumbling over precipice~ my whole life's back to start When a baby ~ hugged a lady Mama was everything Saw how I hurt Gina~ in a terrible way And from there went falling again Dirt walls of tunnel~ swirled~ down as I went Into Hell fire ~ reeking of sulfur incense Egos melt quickly ~ flashing regrets When suddenly was flying~ through the World Wide Internet Busy minds crashed ~ overload trash ~ virus infected files Press enter to clean~ for whatever that means~ I'm deleted on screen I dreamed a Dream

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Date: 2/18/2019 8:09:00 PM
Wow!! What a dream!!! This sounds like something I wrote, yet the theme was a lot different. "His Territory" is the title to the poem. Hmm, I may need post it sometime. Your thoughts hold many moments indeed!! Frightening. ~ Brandy
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Arturo Michael
Date: 2/19/2019 5:40:00 PM
Send me "His Territory"...would like to read it...
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Arturo Michael
Date: 2/19/2019 9:39:00 AM
Thank you Brandy...I'm looking to expand my writing style...I must grown out of the norm...or get stuck in one form...
Date: 2/18/2019 4:30:00 PM
beguiled by the flashing in and out from dream-world, arturo... vivid write!...huggs
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Arturo Michael
Date: 2/19/2019 9:37:00 AM
Thank you nette
Date: 2/18/2019 2:45:00 PM
I feel like I have fallen into this dream too, and am struggling to get out. Wonderful introspection, and tearing apart what a dream truly feels like.
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Arturo Michael
Date: 2/19/2019 9:36:00 AM
Thank you Caren
Date: 2/18/2019 1:07:00 PM
Those dreams where it moves at a fast pace changing from one scene to another and you wake up thinking what was all that about. Love the imagery. Tom
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Arturo Michael
Date: 2/19/2019 9:36:00 AM
Thank you Tom

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