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I Dream

I DREAM
Oh that I could dream a dream Where you’re not haunting me. Oh for just one restful night When you’re not taunting me. I tried so hard to move on, When you told me we must part. I tried to cast you from my mind. But you’re still there in my heart. I am fine in daylight hours; You are hardly there at all. But as the night approaches, It is then that I recall. Perhaps tonight will be the night I finally break free. Perhaps tonight I’ll have a dream Where you’re not haunting me.

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Date: 9/12/2023 12:31:00 PM
Dear Bryn, I was touched by the emotions expressed so poetically in this heartfelt piece. Soulful splendor. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Ink's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/12/2023 4:39:00 AM
This really is very evocative. It is so touching and i felt the emotions flowing through poem: thank you for writing. CONGRATULATIONS
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Date: 9/7/2023 6:38:00 AM
Excellent poem Bryn. Let's hope tonight is the night!
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Bryn Strudwick
Date: 9/7/2023 7:07:00 AM
I'm having a minor operation tomorrow so not sure how I'll sleep tonight!!

Book: Shattered Sighs