I Doubt, God Is There

I doubt ,God is there,
 Inspecting every atmosphere's layer;
 Wrong people have something to dare,
 Getting the right one is rare,
 Corrupt acquiring the king's chair,
 Good ones are paying wrong deed's fare;
 Sons are forgetting parental care,
 It's difficult to search lifelong pair;
 Indiscipline , riots are like silent killer,
 Sitting what are you doing fortune writer;
 Selfishness is the main cause,
 Cutting the money from person's jaws;
 In GITA you told you will be there in good people's side,
 When the wrong things are in roller coaster's ride;
 We all need some of your beatings in dose,
 Punish us to stand in toes;
 Your existence now need a proof,
 Don't just watch from sky's roof;
 Communalism is at its best,
 Your action are required to pass the test;
 Give us the light for the right path,
 Showering in Ganges won't perish devil's bath;
 You are the Supreme Commander of all,
 Stop all this nonsense and daily wars;
 We need you now, we need you a lot,
 See how we have been caught here.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/21/2015 5:58:00 PM
Prateek:) Thank you so much for the reply. That was nice of you to comment my comment. ((Regarding the reply you left in my comment box)) Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 9/26/2014 5:36:00 PM
man creates wars from his greed excellent piece of writing really deep piece god bless
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Date: 9/17/2014 12:53:00 PM
I feel strongly that God is not for magicaly turning all devils to saints or earth to paradise. We r in a test and we hav to pass this mega exam to get to the perfect heavenly abode. God is not responsible for man's sins, He's responsible for guiding and on judgement day to punish the evildoers. What i apreciate is yor poem's excellence at portraying man's ill conduct in nice english and meter.
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Date: 9/11/2014 6:07:00 AM
A nice one tripathi.. I enjoyed reading it... Thumbs up Friend..
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Prateek Tripathi
Date: 9/11/2014 2:05:00 PM
thanks yaseen
Date: 9/5/2014 4:28:00 PM
Prateek, In a way, I feel with you. Where is he when he is needed... I love this poem, it is very powerful, and one awesome, honest view.. Love Linda
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Prateek Tripathi
Date: 9/11/2014 2:05:00 PM
thanku linda for being so supportive
Date: 8/29/2014 10:39:00 AM
Excellent Tripathi... Verlena
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