I Don'T Want You To Go

We danced.
On that cold night
with everyone watching.
We didn't care.
Didn't pay attention to their scoffing.
We kissed.
Lips intertwined in warmth.
Dancing there in your arms,
I felt all my pain go away.
I just want this night to stay.
A never-ending love
that has captivated my soul.
I just don't want you to ever go.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Montgomery Avatar
January 30, 2009 at 8:59 AM
thanks for your comments...helps alot..This poem is about Josh :) lol sorry he's just so amazing..
Schermerhorn Avatar
January 21, 2009 at 10:43 AM
Beautiful as usual Serenity, very well written and the flow was wonderful this poem here has captured true love in it's finest moment
Higgins Avatar
January 21, 2009 at 8:31 AM
First the beauty in this write is portrayed so well. The poem flows with love, want and the need never to say goodbye. Wonderful work.
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