I don't want you to die for me

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Lost in this simple game playing out a satisfying life A partner engaged with me, never causing strife Softly, we tremble together in the summer warmth tonight Before I met you, I wasn't happy; alone in my own sad dim light You're a beautiful cat; I am the mouse caught within your sight I feel immortal holding hands; as the sun sets to benight Vulnerable, all though knowing the space between us is airtight I'm satisfied; for you are all I've ever wanted, finding it came at a more than reasonable price! I don't need you to die for me; I need you to live life out with me, never, ever, thinking twice!

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/31/2024 4:23:00 PM

Hello Anonomus, Scorpio, A very clever poem. it made me smile. Enjoy your evening my friend. /darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/1/2024 5:14:00 AM

Greetings Anonomus Scorpio, Your welcome. I hope all as well with you. Enjoy your day my friend. Warmly, /Darlene/

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 7/31/2024 5:43:00 PM

Greetings Darlene, I am very glad you enjoyed this one thank you for the wonderful compliment! Warmly A.S.

Paige Hind

Date: 7/30/2024 9:06:00 PM

A sweet and loving poem, A.S. I wish you every happiness. <3

Paige Hind
Date: 7/31/2024 11:35:00 AM

And you too! :)

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 7/30/2024 9:10:00 PM

Just knowing you exist grants this simplest of wish .... With respect always A.S.