I Don'T Want To Rhyme Anymore

First, I tried to rhyme 
with your spirits...

For I really thought I saw in it
our own beginning, without end
and my heart accented to love 

I gave my very best 
and you surely know that 
‘twas 100% rhyme

Yet after years of enjoying my soul 
marinated in your wants and wishes
I noticed your words, drifting like heavy rain 
that my big palms barely hold them

Have you ever considered my being?

That this morning, after a shower 
rinsed the great pain I kept 
in my breath, I opted to walk the sun-lit
corridor of free verse, where I can be me
just as what I always wanted to be... 

Without engaging my dignity
in too much psychedelic wars

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 3/30/2009 4:46:00 AM
Well written with a nice in-depth finish
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Date: 3/12/2009 9:58:00 AM
Well I loved it a month ago and its still great ... smile ... you haven't been around for awhile ... hope you don't mean the title literally!! I'm having a hard time keeping up with all the newbies at PoetrySoup!! Thought I'd come and hollar at those who have supported my writing when I was new too. Have a great day, Ernesto!!
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Date: 3/5/2009 8:00:00 PM
E/S: . . have you ever considered my being? . . what a conquest of self!!! Paula Larson (the opposite of the cornered female, in an escapeless relationship arrangement) great reflex for your male make-up! Sounds bitter doesn't it!! (What about our publishing deal) I have been into study, but am freer now, with the Spring thaw)
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Date: 2/28/2009 12:44:00 PM
Ok I get this one..yet still I must say..and I hope you will teach to my ignorance..what I feel so far is ----"full of sound and fury sinifiying nothing" Macbeth/Shakespeare (I'm running now LOL) Debbie
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Date: 2/25/2009 2:20:00 PM
Upon a time once I felt the exact same way about a someone.
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Date: 2/18/2009 10:50:00 AM
WOW the last two lines came kapow!! ... smile ... what a remarkable write you have done here, Ernesto!! As Karen says, it gives one much to think about and Aquarian that I am ... more smiles ... I really identify with the "corridor of free verse" ... wonderful writing!!
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Date: 2/8/2009 12:57:00 PM
wow!. . .great write. . . many blessings, *Breana
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