I Don'T Want To Lose Her

Here I sit, staring at the wall,
- trying to figure out what to do. 
Hoping our love won't fall.
*
I pick up the phone and try to call,
- but I feel so cold, so down, so blue. 
Here I sit, staring at the wall. 
*
With out her here I can not walk, only crawl.
- Always just one, but soon we'll be two. 
Hoping our love won't fall.
*
My eyes tear up, I begin to bawl.
- She would say, "Together forever, me and you." 
Here I sit, staring at the wall.
*
If I lose her I'll have nothing, nothing at all! 
- I will be lost, without a clue. 
Hoping our love won't fall.
*
Constantly pacing up and down the hall,
- but she's stuck to my heart with the strongest of glue. 
Here I sit staring at the wall, 
Hoping our love won't fall.
---
JE

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/27/2014 7:11:00 PM
HA, so this is the one that started it all... I'm glad too that I read it... I'm still trying to learn the way of others. thanks for the reply...Linda
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Date: 7/27/2014 7:04:00 PM
John, now that's what I call love. The best part of love, comes from the deepest parts of us.. Like worrying. You have a wonderful poem, that flows. Enjoyed the rhyme... Linda
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Early Jae
Date: 7/27/2014 7:08:00 PM
Thank you, this is one I wrote a while back, it's the one that gave me the poetry bug! So I'm super glad you like it!
Date: 7/22/2014 5:20:00 PM
Thank you for sharing :)
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Early Jae
Date: 7/22/2014 7:08:00 PM
Thank you for reading!
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