Early Jae Poet Villanelle

I Don'T Want To Lose Her

Here I sit, staring at the wall,
- trying to figure out what to do. 
Hoping our love won't fall.
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I pick up the phone and try to call,
- but I feel so cold, so down, so blue. 
Here I sit, staring at the wall. 
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With out her here I can not walk, only crawl.
- Always just one, but soon we'll be two. 
Hoping our love won't fall.
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My eyes tear up, I begin to bawl.
- She would say, "Together forever, me and you." 
Here I sit, staring at the wall.
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If I lose her I'll have nothing, nothing at all! 
- I will be lost, without a clue. 
Hoping our love won't fall.
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Constantly pacing up and down the hall,
- but she's stuck to my heart with the strongest of glue. 
Here I sit staring at the wall, 
Hoping our love won't fall.
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JE

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Poet Destroyer A July 27, 2014 at 7:11 PM HA, so this is the one that started it all... I'm glad too that I read it... I'm still trying to learn the way of others. thanks for the reply...Linda

Poet Destroyer A July 27, 2014 at 7:04 PM John, now that's what I call love. The best part of love, comes from the deepest parts of us.. Like worrying. You have a wonderful poem, that flows. Enjoyed the rhyme... Linda Early Jae July 27, 2014 at 7:08 PM Thank you, this is one I wrote a while back, it's the one that gave me the poetry bug! So I'm super glad you like it!

James Hyler July 22, 2014 at 5:20 PM Thank you for sharing :) Early Jae July 22, 2014 at 7:08 PM Thank you for reading!