I Dont Really Care What People Say

Taking life on a slow mo
Its a no go
To see how wanderful 
You go old

Not so wanderful
when you see the cape
Trying to make your escape
But its all fake

People think too loud
World's such a crowd
They ignore my shouts
I see more rain in the dark clouds

I saw babies crying 
Falling
Making death on the street
Cant tell when you bleed?

I think people talk to loud
Gatta say what they want
What they see
Why dont you let my life be?

I dont really care
What people say
Just care where
My life's going today

Its a Rap
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Jordan Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 4:34 PM
Sajdah wonderful words - enjoyed this piece - God Bless, MJ
Brown Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 2:27 PM
Sajdah, I enjoyed your piece today. Great to see you writing. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 1:17 PM
Cool rap, interesting, Wincerely Moses
Kendrick Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 12:49 PM
Interesting writing. Keep Writing. Sara
Chircop Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 12:45 PM
i dont care what people say either--cheers:)charma
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