Timothy Mcguire Poet Rhyme

I Dont Love You

I don't love you anymore,
The magic is gone,
I'm out the door,
I don't know what went wrong.

Things aren't what they use to be,
Now we just co-exist,
I don't love you and you don't love me,
Months since we kissed.

At first it was fun and we tried,
But our flame has gone out,
What we thought we had just died,
We blame each other no doubt.

There is nothing we need to say,
I don't love you, I'm sure you see,
Its time for us to walk away,
You don't love me, go be free.

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Line Gauthier September 10, 2018 at 8:54 AM Well penned, Timothy. Sad but people do drift apart. Best to leave on good terms. Timothy Mcguire September 10, 2018 at 3:33 PM You are right Line. More than 50% of the time.

Cassandra Justice September 6, 2018 at 9:34 AM Sadly flames die out more often than not these days. Love your poetry. Timothy Mcguire September 6, 2018 at 10:25 AM You are right Cassandra. Thank you so much for the kind words. I will soon look at your work.

Lindsay Laurie September 5, 2018 at 7:56 PM Hello Timothy … I guess partnerships grow on respect and trust, and as your poem suggests if these begin to fall apart, then it's time to part and for both sakes, a clean break - thanks Timothy - Lindsay Timothy Mcguire September 5, 2018 at 9:01 PM Thanks Lindsay. Not all romances are good ones. You are right.

Tom Cunningham September 5, 2018 at 3:27 AM It's sad when the flames of love die out in a relationship . Tom Timothy Mcguire September 5, 2018 at 11:59 AM You are right friend. I think for every good love story there is a bad one too.