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I Dont Love You

I don't love you anymore, The magic is gone, I'm out the door, I don't know what went wrong. Things aren't what they use to be, Now we just co-exist, I don't love you and you don't love me, Months since we kissed. At first it was fun and we tried, But our flame has gone out, What we thought we had just died, We blame each other no doubt. There is nothing we need to say, I don't love you, I'm sure you see, Its time for us to walk away, You don't love me, go be free.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 9/10/2018 8:54:00 AM

Well penned, Timothy. Sad but people do drift apart. Best to leave on good terms.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/10/2018 3:33:00 PM

You are right Line. More than 50% of the time.

Cassandra Justice

Date: 9/6/2018 9:34:00 AM

Sadly flames die out more often than not these days. Love your poetry.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/6/2018 10:25:00 AM

You are right Cassandra. Thank you so much for the kind words. I will soon look at your work.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/5/2018 7:56:00 PM

Hello Timothy … I guess partnerships grow on respect and trust, and as your poem suggests if these begin to fall apart, then it's time to part and for both sakes, a clean break - thanks Timothy - Lindsay

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/5/2018 9:01:00 PM

Thanks Lindsay. Not all romances are good ones. You are right.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/5/2018 3:27:00 AM

It's sad when the flames of love die out in a relationship . Tom

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/5/2018 11:59:00 AM

You are right friend. I think for every good love story there is a bad one too.