I Dont Know What To Name This....For Nick

Unsure if Its a poem or a song, I meant it to be a poem but its kinda song formatting...so I 
dont know lol... 

We're both heart broken,
Our hearts hanging together by a few loose strands,
Our eyes over flowing where the river bends,
We're suffocating, without the air to breath,
I'm so sorry baby - please come back to me

I made a mistake, my choice was wrong,
I cant live without my love,
Like the birds cant sing without their song,
I broke both our hearts,
It wasnt my right,
The night cant shine without the stars, 
Like the day wont shine without the sunlight,

We're both heart broken,
Hiding our tears and hanging our heads,
Our lips aren't speaking the words that should be said,
Our blood runs cold, without the fire in our hearts,
I dont want this to happen - please dont depart,

I made a mistake, my choice was wrong,
I cant live without my love,
Like the birds cant sing without their song,
I broke both our hearts,
It wasnt my right,
The night cant shine without the stars,
Like the day wont shine without the sunlight,

You are my stars, and you are my sun,
I am your skies, and together we are one,
How can I sing, if ive lost my song,
How can I live if Ive lost my only one,

I made a mistake, my choice was wrong,
I cant live without my love,
Like the birds cant sing without their song,
I broke both our hearts,
It wasnt my right,
The night cant shine without the stars,
Like the day wont shine without the sunlight,

Please baby - forgive me, 
I know I was wrong,
Id do anything baby,
Just to hear our hearts song,

I made a mistake, my choice was wrong,
I cant live without my love,
Like the birds cant sing without their song,
I broke both our hearts,
And I know it wasnt my right,
I cant breath without your love,
I cant see without your light.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Neels Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 1:59 PM
This is a beautiful write. Hope he forgives you..
Sweetheart Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 12:06 PM
Congrats Rain (Bow) ..what did u win? whose contest was it? was it on Soup? this poem should be Free Verse form..luv.. enjoyed your emotional wirte tonday and thankxxx for letting me know luv..
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