I Don'T Belive In Stars

The bliss full black night
shows signs of an end.
With stars holding us down
like its the oldest sky trend.
And its hard to match this feeling
full of empty regret
despite how much I thought
that our future was set.
But I really don't care 
about your doubts so dyer,
no matter how far the view
our spirits will go higher.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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March 2, 2011 at 12:29 PM
Creative and interesting write , Tristan
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