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I Do Not Miss You When You'Re Gone

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I do not miss you when you're gone My sleep, ever so serene, from dusk til dawn When the bough of bond between us breaks There's no part of my beating heart that aches Whenever a soul mentions your name I can assure you, it doesn't spark a flame When you trail off like contrails in the sky You're so far gone; invisible in my mind's eye I swear, your goodbyes are never sad And I never pine for you, not even a tad Lonely moments and cold nights never seem long I'm free, soaring with wings so sturdy and strong Each time you depart, and hours fly; all is fine Never mind this coldly indifferent heart of mine It's made of steel and stone, and feels nothing for you; nothing at all. But who am I kidding? Last Letter to my Beloved Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One (Winner: 1st Place) Date written and posted: 12/09/2018 STANDARD CONTEST 145,ANY FORM,ANY THEME,UPTO A MAX OF 20 LINES Sponsored by Brian Strand (Winner: 1st Place) Date written and posted: 12/09/2018

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Date: 12/16/2018 4:13:00 PM
Hi Edward, I really enjoyed your take on the contest theme. It had a realistical tone and vibe. I didn't expect the last line but it was a good ending. Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/16/2018 5:51:00 PM
Thank you for your wonderful comments, Alexis!:-) And I'm glad you liked the touch of irony to the poem!
Date: 12/16/2018 11:54:00 AM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Edward ... goodbyes are never sad ... - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/16/2018 12:49:00 PM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise!:-)
Date: 12/16/2018 11:11:00 AM
Heartbreaking lines... touching poem that many who have felt loss can relate to.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/16/2018 11:48:00 AM
Thank you very much, Silent One!:-) I appreciate the supportive comments, and my placement in your contest!
Date: 12/15/2018 8:24:00 AM
You can't fool yourself as your excellent write make so clear.' Congratulations on your well deserved win Edward!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/15/2018 1:04:00 PM
Thank you so much, Mike!:-) Much obliged.

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