I Do

Hard to have faith in everlasting love the credibility of a white dress and white dove A world where so few stay faithful, stay true Just know it's true, I love you eternally, "I do" by: Nicole Hawkins written for "Wedding is one of the special events in marriage"

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2011 9:52:00 PM

ONe of the sweetest ones in the contest. Congratulations on your win, Nicole

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/4/2011 7:46:00 AM

You are so right about only a few staying faithful, Nicole. Awesome poem. Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/4/2011 6:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Nicole in the contest "Wedding is one of the special events in marriage" sponsored by Dr. Ram Mehta. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/4/2011 3:00:00 AM

nicole, such a tender piece that makes me swoon!! CONGRATS on the happy win! :) huggs, nette

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/3/2011 7:35:00 PM

Lucky indeed for those who find that kind of faithful love... beautiful kimo Nicole-- congrats on your win :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/3/2011 6:29:00 PM

Congrats Nicole on your wonderful win so fantastic in the wedding contest with these beautiful words luv.. enjoy another sweet victory for sure luv..

John Freeman

Date: 4/3/2011 4:48:00 PM

A good looking verse there in the top ten Nicole. Congratulations on your worthy poem's eighth place honor. Quite good, a touching verse. Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/3/2011 3:20:00 PM

Congratulations on the eighth place win in my contest, Nicole

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/29/2011 4:23:00 AM

Thanks for the entry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2011 10:25:00 PM

It's good some people like you still believe in it, Nicole!