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I dived into the cauldron of magic potion

I dived into the cauldron of magic potion. I found myself on a wavy, whirly ocean. My little boat has holes. Anytime it could sink. Water skins gone empty, I had no drop to drink. Jellyfish, lionfish, sea urchins, and stingray How could I from these cruel creatures stay away? Hungry and thirsty, I find no lighthouse around. From churches, why do I not hear any bell sound? I had spent my life seeking to find its meaning. Towards salvation has ever been my leaning. I feel I am moving towards it in this sail. I feel in my adventure I will never fail.

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Date: 3/8/2025 8:22:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
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Date: 3/8/2025 5:54:00 AM
This is a lovely poem, Christuraj. I love the rhythmic flow of the rhymes. Congratulations.
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Date: 3/7/2025 1:28:00 AM
Congratulations Christuraj Alex on your triumph in this contest. Your entry is a potent amalgam of philosophical inkling, breathtaking imagery and nuanced narrative. Success on merit Howard
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 3/7/2025 10:00:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 2/12/2025 4:44:00 AM
Dear poetic soul, this is such a beautiful poem, i love how youv used sea elements and creatures to depict your innermost thoughts in such a poetic manner in such a captivating cadence, i especially love "My little boat has holes. Anytime it could sink. Water skins gone empty, I had no drop to drink. " whoa i can literally imagine that! What a powerful yet lyrical take, the rhythm of your rhymes truly stand out for me. Pleasure reading this moving poem: sending you light always
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Date: 2/12/2025 9:56:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

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