Christuraj Alex Poet Rhyme

I dived into the cauldron of magic potion

I dived into the cauldron of magic potion.
I found myself on a wavy, whirly ocean.
My little boat has holes. Anytime it could sink.
Water skins gone empty, I had no drop to drink.

Jellyfish, lionfish, sea urchins, and stingray
How could I from these cruel creatures stay away?
Hungry and thirsty, I find no lighthouse around.
From churches, why do I not hear any bell sound?

I had spent my life seeking to find its meaning.
Towards salvation has ever been my leaning.
I feel I am moving towards it in this sail.
I feel in my adventure I will never fail.

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Christuraj Alex March 8, 2025 at 8:22 AM Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

Thompson Emate March 8, 2025 at 5:54 AM This is a lovely poem, Christuraj. I love the rhythmic flow of the rhymes. Congratulations.

Howard Kerr March 7, 2025 at 1:28 AM Congratulations Christuraj Alex on your triumph in this contest. Your entry is a potent amalgam of philosophical inkling, breathtaking imagery and nuanced narrative. Success on merit Howard Christuraj Alex March 7, 2025 at 10:00 PM Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

Ink Empress February 12, 2025 at 4:44 AM Dear poetic soul, this is such a beautiful poem, i love how youv used sea elements and creatures to depict your innermost thoughts in such a poetic manner in such a captivating cadence, i especially love "My little boat has holes. Anytime it could sink. Water skins gone empty, I had no drop to drink. " whoa i can literally imagine that! What a powerful yet lyrical take, the rhythm of your rhymes truly stand out for me. Pleasure reading this moving poem: sending you light always Christuraj Alex February 12, 2025 at 9:56 PM Thank you very much. May God Bless You!