I Dis-Like Myself

Why do I do this?
Everytime I get myself into
This situation and can't get
Back out
Life has always sucked since
I was abused By my brothers dad
I've been beaten so much it isn't funny

I wish I could just die so this could 
All be over in a second
I'm not loved the way I want
To be
I just want my life to
End right NOW!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Selby Avatar
October 1, 2008 at 3:52 PM
You must be important to be going threw all of those trials. Many Smiles Phebe
Williams Avatar
September 28, 2008 at 9:07 PM
hey son, life is to short, life is not suppose to be a bed of roses. i was beaten by my step dad and my brothers and the kids at school. life will hand you a lot of ruff stuff, you just have to know how to deal with it. but don't end your life.
Ferguson Avatar
September 28, 2008 at 7:08 PM
It made sound cold but there's no point in escaping your problems through death. I can understand how you feel but most of the problems in your life are probably beyond your control and they aren't your fault. I don't understand your situation and maybe my words are falling on deaf ears. If anything else, read my poem Soul Cleaver, it might help you relate. P.S. I promise I'm not trying to bombard you with my poetry.
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