I Cry Alone

In the paper, on the news, each day there is another Article relating to another fallen brother Each eulogized for what they did and how they were so brave A nation mourns their youthful death, salutes fired at their grave I watch as everyone bemoans the needless loss of life And gives support to mothers, dads, a husband or a wife To help them mend their empty hearts, sooth the grief they feel Giving comfort where they can to help the families heal I'm grateful for the love they get, their help do not bemoan But I too have an aching heart as I sit here alone You see, I also lost a son, the center of my life The little boy I loved so much, his loss cuts like a knife He was not a soldier, his country did not serve But even so to die so young, he did not deserve My boy was an addict, the scars of drugs he bore He tried so hard to shake it, he fought a private war You will not read about him, no medals will be hung No glowing declarations said, no praises will be sung The nation will not feel a loss, though my life is undone He'll always be my hero, he'll always be my son
Many families have suffered the loss of a child, regardless of reason. It is how we treat that fine line between the soldier and the "all others" that I hoped to express.. Their families grieve no less. P.S. This poem was not written from personal experience.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Horne Avatar
September 28, 2011 at 5:16 PM
Very moving piece with a thought provoking message, Bob. Many congrats on your wins too : )
Quigley Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 12:08 AM
Thank you Jack
K. Avatar
September 28, 2011 at 2:55 PM
Such a powerful write-- I almost thought this was from personal experience... you've taken that challenge so well, Bob! I can't help but agree with your note at the end, beautifully worded poem you have here... and congrats on all your wins, thank you for all your greetings & comments
Quigley Avatar
September 28, 2011 at 4:32 PM
And thank you for stopping by. Appreciate your comments
Susan Avatar
September 26, 2011 at 4:25 PM
Beautiful words. All of those losses are tragic. I like how you tied in your (fake) personal part to show that loss is loss, medal or no medal.
Austin Avatar
September 26, 2011 at 4:15 PM
Maddening, the insanity that is war, the scourge of drugs. Good write, Bob. Thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver
Roberts Avatar
September 25, 2011 at 3:21 PM
beautifully written Bob
Quigley Avatar
September 28, 2011 at 4:31 PM
Thanks Francine
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