I Cry

Sometimes I wonder what went wrong,
And why you said goodbye.
I know you think that I've moved on,
But still sometimes I cry.

I never thought that you would leave,
And things would end this way.
I never thought I'd be alone
At the end of that same day.

I loved you more than anything,
You were my closest friend.
But when you packed your things and left,
It all came to an end.

Even though I'm stronger now,
I sometimes wonder why.
And even though some time has past,
There are still those times I cry.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/19/2010 9:40:00 PM
You're welcome, post more poems and HAVE FUN!
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Date: 10/19/2010 8:37:00 PM
HI, Kelly and welcome here. I enjoyed reading your FIRST post here! by the way, if you dont' know what to do, click on a poet's name when they comment to you and then comment back to them on their poem. I recall when I first came here last December, I did like you and answered people under my own poem but they will not see your comment that you made to them becuase they only will see the comments you make to them on THEIR poems. Hope that makes sense to you. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/19/2010 8:27:00 PM
Thank you so much everyone. I have never let anyone read what I have written so this was a difficult process. Your warm thoughts and words have been a wonderful surprise so once again... thank you!
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Date: 10/17/2010 9:35:00 AM
i feel this poem so much my friend thank you for letting me read this peace wonderful duncan
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Date: 10/16/2010 11:07:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kelly. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/15/2010 12:20:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your creative poetry today ... hope u will check out the contest scene offered to new members on site.. good luck with luv..
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Date: 10/15/2010 12:12:00 PM
Hey Kelly, Welcome to the Soup. Love is always the strongest emotion and the way you captured it here is brilliant. More poems please
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