I Couldnt See the Breeze
volatile faces
perspiring fingers
broken branches
of love
abandoned perspective
dominant understandings
espoused
period of transition
brown leaves falling
without charm or sadness
i couldnt see the breeze
but feel the trees smiling
she is searching in the attic
for the lost rusty love
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