I Couldn'T Help But Hold My Breath

Your depression hangs
Like an unbearable stench
In this room of mine.

I cannot pretend
To fix you better than the
Others before me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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May 31, 2016 at 5:42 PM
Good HAIKU Briana... great rhythm. Best wishes, Keith
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June 12, 2015 at 8:36 PM
Briana. good haiku...Enjoyed. **SKAT**
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