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I Couldn'T Help But Hold My Breath

Your depression hangs
Like an unbearable stench
In this room of mine.

I cannot pretend
To fix you better than the
Others before me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/31/2016 5:42:00 PM
Good HAIKU Briana... great rhythm. Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 6/12/2015 8:36:00 PM
Briana. good haiku...Enjoyed. **SKAT**
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