Notes About The Poem

I could be drowning

Alone lost in a crowd
bold silence overpowers the roar of traffic
~ the world perseveres without hesitation



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 1st place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 4:38 PM
wow, these words are powerful...loved the brevity!
Gauthier Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 9:06 PM
thank you very much, most appreciated ~
Rodrigues Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 12:33 PM
Funny how that happens!
Gauthier Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 3:01 PM
And at other times, we feel totally in sync ~
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