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I Committed the Perfect Crime

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MANY THANKS TO MY ON LINE FRIEND 'ANFIELDANGEL' FOR THE IDEA FOR THE POEM

My husband acted like a complete jerk had countless affairs with women at work He wore spray on jeans which fit so tight and aftershave called ‘Tonight’s the night’ I knew for sure that things weren’t right as he’d hide his cell phone from my sight I’d opened one of his credit card bills he’d purchased boxes of Viagra pills! Guess he used them with that busty floozy the office temp, I think her name’s Suzie One thing’s for certain, I have learned hell hath no fury like a woman spurned So I carefully plotted to get my revenge and lure him in a ice tunnel at Stonehenge Ice stalactites hung low from the ceiling a brisk blow to his head left him reeling With a stiletto sharp icicle I pierced his chest as the ice melted, I knew there’d be no arrest As there’s no evidence left to incriminate me Yes, I’d got away with his murder … scot-free! It was the perfect crime I’d expertly planned I'm sure any scorned woman would understand! N/a in Murder in the Tunnel Poetry Contest judged 2/12/21 Submitted to NA Poem From a February 2021 - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France 01/26/21

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/18/2021 4:16:00 PM

Congratulation on your win. Oh no, did you just confess????? A wonderful story/write. Have a blessed day.............

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/18/2021 10:41:00 AM

Remind me not to go into ice caves with you Jan! I-c your plan so well devised! Congrats and kudos on your most creative plot, plan and win! hugs - Sam

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 1/29/2021 3:14:00 PM

Hello Jan … the law might tell you that you’ve got a lot to answer for but I reckon your scheme is brilliant - thank you Jan - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 1/29/2021 4:52:00 PM

lol shhh dont let on my secret lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jack Horne

Date: 1/28/2021 12:58:00 PM

LOL, I can picture all this so clearly - hubby better'd behave

Jan Allison
Date: 1/29/2021 4:51:00 PM

lol Jack:-)hugs jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 1/27/2021 10:58:00 AM

Well done, Jan, and your illustration is the icing on the cake! I expected Kim would follow-up on her Nails on Chalkboard poem, but you were firstest with the mostest! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 1/27/2021 2:42:00 PM

I had such fun going to the dark side, glad you like the pic I thought it was perfect for the poem:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/27/2021 10:37:00 AM

wonderfully told, jan! best of luck in the contest...

Jan Allison
Date: 1/27/2021 2:40:00 PM

Thanks Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/27/2021 7:26:00 AM

- An ice cold planned murder ... a revenge murder, Jan :) - Skillfully written ... I work a bit with this contest ... I'll see where it takes me :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs / / Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 1/27/2021 2:39:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise this was such fun to write:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 1/27/2021 5:01:00 AM

Wow, a great story Jan, best wishes in the contest..

Jan Allison
Date: 1/27/2021 2:39:00 PM

Thanks so much Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/27/2021 3:43:00 AM

Could be the perfect crime, though with the technology of today, it's a bit hard. ~~

Jan Allison
Date: 1/27/2021 2:38:00 PM

Thanks Victor:-) hugs jan xx

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 1/27/2021 1:27:00 AM

Hahahaha! A perfect crime, indeed! Enjoyed! Good luck for the contest!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/27/2021 2:38:00 PM

thanks Seeker:-) Hugs jan x

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/26/2021 6:32:00 PM

OMG, you kill me stiletto or not, this one's the best Jan .

Jan Allison
Date: 1/27/2021 2:37:00 PM

thanks Vienna:-) hugs jan xx

Akkina Downing

Date: 1/26/2021 6:16:00 PM

Jan, my heart is been feeling down these past few days, but tonight visiting you just made me laugh out loud reading your lovely and humor poem. Thank you :)

Jan Allison
Date: 1/27/2021 2:37:00 PM

aww Akkina so glad i made you smile, I was so glad to go over to the dark side for this one lol:-) not sure what Kai will think of it though!:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/26/2021 6:10:00 PM

Jan, Sherlock Holmes himself + 10 Watsons couldn't solve this one. ~ Ice-Cold Pops

Jan Allison
Date: 1/27/2021 2:36:00 PM

lol thanks GW:-) hugs jan xx

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 1/26/2021 3:30:00 PM

Brilliant Jan, such a sharp wit you have. You’ve created the perfect crime with no fear of doing time. Artfully carried out, loved it. Hugs Belle :-) xx

Jan Allison
Date: 1/26/2021 3:43:00 PM

The idea came from an online friend , it was such fun to base the poem on their idea:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/26/2021 3:10:00 PM

WoW! Jan, You penned a good entry for the contest. You came up with the perfect plot to get away scot-free. A good contender for the contest. Best wishes for the contest. Well done:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 1/26/2021 3:41:00 PM

It was such fun to venture to the dark side lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Terry Flood

Date: 1/26/2021 2:59:00 PM

Hi lovely Jan. have I told you how much I admire your poetry skills, your sharp wit, verbal dexterity and subtle undertones. One can only gaze in awe at... Jan... Jan... put the icicle down, Jan........ Love it Jan... I’m outa here....

Jan Allison
Date: 1/26/2021 3:40:00 PM

ha ha ha thanks Terry:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenna Logan

Date: 1/26/2021 1:51:00 PM

Totally awesome write, and he had it coming. That's a good plan, Jan...no evidence. I'll be sure to stay on your good side.

Jan Allison
Date: 1/26/2021 1:56:00 PM

Aww thanks Jenna, an on line friend made a comment yesterday about the perfect crime and killing with an icicle so I said I'd write a poem around the idea and started it last night and was amazed to see kai's contest. it really was fun to cross over to the dark side for a change lol:-) hugs jan xx