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I Close My Eyes

I close my eyes... Your hands run over my hips, Followed closely by your lips, As you sit afore me on the bed; Sending frissons from my toes to head. I close my eyes... I feel your eyes upon me: What is it that you see? Some-one with whom to have fun? Something to discard when you’re done? I close my eyes... Time has passed I still feel your touch Or is it just in my mind Because I want it so much. I close my eyes... You’re not here. You won’t be here again. Tears stream down my face In a river of pain.

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Skat A

Date: 2/5/2016 5:43:00 PM

:) skat

Sheol Moribund

Date: 11/15/2013 11:21:00 AM

Great poem!!! They say time heals all wounds, unfortunately there is never enough of that (time). Hope that you have a great day.

Skat A

Date: 9/9/2013 9:00:00 PM

Pandora,, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat * ...

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 9/9/2013 4:23:00 PM

Hello Pandora, Welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope you will enjoy your time here shared with all of us. It is great fun and the poetry is thrilling! Loved your creative write, lots of feelings went into this one. Keep it flowing honey and I look forward to reading lots more of you. As Always, Shar

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/8/2013 7:10:00 AM

hi Pandora, I love this free verse , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/8/2013 5:48:00 AM

Welcome to P-Soup, Pandora ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)