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I Chose to Live in The Clouds

I Chose to Live In the Clouds

my feet are fixed to the ground
the world pulls at me to bring me down
my head and heart are with my Savior
He has bestowed on me his favor
and by His promise of hope
He helps me cope
and I can shout out loud
I can live with Him in the clouds

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Kim Rodrigues Date: 3/10/2025 6:14:00 AM Love how you began this poem with feet fixed to the ground, then end it with life with Christ in the clouds. As we are humbled, he pulls us up. God bless! Login to Reply Oliver Mckeithan Date: 3/10/2025 1:19:00 PM Yes He does. Glad you like this. We are humbled. Thank you Kim

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/9/2025 3:29:00 PM Wow. I bet Tom will like this one. It's a great testament to your faith Login to Reply Oliver Mckeithan Date: 3/9/2025 3:50:00 PM Thanks Andrea. I hope he does. I wish I could say my faith was 100% all the time.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/9/2025 1:18:00 PM - Sounds lovely, Oliver :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs Login to Reply Oliver Mckeithan Date: 3/9/2025 2:16:00 PM Thanks Anne-Lise