Oliver Mckeithan Poet Rhyme

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03/09/25

I Chose to Dwell In The Clouds

Tom Woody

I Chose to Live in The Clouds

I Chose to Live In the Clouds

my feet are fixed to the ground
the world pulls at me to bring me down
my head and heart are with my Savior
He has bestowed on me his favor
and by His promise of hope
He helps me cope
and I can shout out loud
I can live with Him in the clouds

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Kim Rodrigues March 10, 2025 at 6:14 AM Love how you began this poem with feet fixed to the ground, then end it with life with Christ in the clouds. As we are humbled, he pulls us up. God bless! Oliver Mckeithan March 10, 2025 at 1:19 PM Yes He does. Glad you like this. We are humbled. Thank you Kim

Andrea Dietrich March 9, 2025 at 3:29 PM Wow. I bet Tom will like this one. It's a great testament to your faith Oliver Mckeithan March 9, 2025 at 3:50 PM Thanks Andrea. I hope he does. I wish I could say my faith was 100% all the time.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2025 at 1:18 PM - Sounds lovely, Oliver :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs Oliver Mckeithan March 9, 2025 at 2:16 PM Thanks Anne-Lise