Notes About The Poem

I chased butterflies today

I ran through dewy fields
in the flush of morning
playing tag with the breeze ~
heard the sweetest invitation sounding
like chanting from meadow mermaids.

I followed the trail of a hummingbird
and the butterflies just laughed.
They floated gracefully with ease
from one bloom chalice to the other.
Joyfully I danced under the midday sun
I followed the fluttering wings
of some delightfully playful butterflies.

The meadow was a field of dreams.
It sizzled with sunny giddiness,
an exuberance that was contagious.
I’d say I was in hot pursuit
but I was actually frolicking in blissfulness



Lineku: 3 stanzas 5-7-5 of 5 or 7 words per line

AP: 2nd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 7:24 AM
such a flowing poem filled with airyness--sublime.
Gauthier Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 7:56 AM
Thank you very much, Sara ~
Wolf Avatar
November 6, 2025 at 8:57 PM
Lovely, lovely! Enchanting and uplifting... Keep these coming. ~ Dewy dandelions, Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 7:56 AM
Hello Gershon ~ thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment
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