Darylsue Lockhart Poet Rhyme

I Can'T Take It

You broke my heart,
You ruined my life.

You stabbed me in the back,
With a red, ridged knife.

You tore me apart,
To pieces you see.

And you didn’t care,
That was always the key.

You took something from me,
And I’ll never get it back.

While you try to score,
And stay in your “pack”.

My virginity gone,
With a man who lied.

Now part of me rots,
While dying inside.



If you have a better category that i should put this in, let me know please. Thanks.

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Craig Watson November 3, 2010 at 3:19 AM You know DaryIsue, this is like fuel thats gonna 'cause my heart a melt-down. I'm gonna write a little rhyme dedicated to you (and others with a similar story) Get this rage of my chest >:/

Debbie Guzzi November 2, 2010 at 3:14 PM Rhyme or verse is your category and I do know the feelings you discribed BUT it's a totally false concept are men taught to cry after their 1st experience NO they are taught to be proud of becoming a man. We MAKE are girls shoulder more pain than necessary for a part of life which must come and is just that LIFE! BIG HUGS!!!Light & Love