I Can'T Sing

Birds sing for a mate,
Outside my window they meet.
I wish I could sing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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De La Croes Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 3:28 AM
The secret of a good haiku is how one reads it, and since your simple words encapsulate your desire and your inadequacy when measured against nature, I am very impressed with your writing, Gerald. Looking forward to see more of your writing! Cheers, David
Alcantara Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 5:13 PM
Wow, thanks so much David! Your encouragement is much appreciated! Cheers!
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July 7, 2016 at 5:16 PM
Not a haiku...but good you think it is....hugs...skat
Alcantara Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 9:03 PM
Just logged in, thanks for the feedback, but just curious, what doesn't make this a haiku? Just trying to better myself as a writer.. thanks!
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