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I Can'T Sing

Birds sing for a mate, Outside my window they meet. I wish I could sing.

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David De La Croes

Date: 7/8/2016 3:28:00 AM

The secret of a good haiku is how one reads it, and since your simple words encapsulate your desire and your inadequacy when measured against nature, I am very impressed with your writing, Gerald. Looking forward to see more of your writing! Cheers, David

Gerald Alcantara
Date: 7/8/2016 5:13:00 PM

Wow, thanks so much David! Your encouragement is much appreciated! Cheers!

Skat A

Date: 7/7/2016 5:16:00 PM

Not a haiku...but good you think it is....hugs...skat

Gerald Alcantara
Date: 11/6/2016 9:03:00 PM

Just logged in, thanks for the feedback, but just curious, what doesn't make this a haiku? Just trying to better myself as a writer.. thanks!