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I Can'T Hear You X 3

cannot feel no more 
 people talking to me loud 
 my cave I’m dwelling 
   
 erupts in my ear 
 dark feels so comfortable 
 the drum blown to bits 
   
 isolation time 
 nothing helps me hear even you 
 retired in my mind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/26/2014 5:39:00 AM
- Deep emotions - touching haiku, Gregory ! - Well written. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Gregory Ramos
Date: 1/26/2014 9:33:00 PM
thank you anne
Date: 1/26/2014 5:08:00 AM
nice flow of emotions, gregory
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Gregory Ramos
Date: 1/26/2014 7:29:00 AM
thank you DR for your review

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