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I Can'T Hear You X 3

cannot feel no more people talking to me loud my cave I’m dwelling erupts in my ear dark feels so comfortable the drum blown to bits isolation time nothing helps me hear even you retired in my mind

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Date: 1/26/2014 5:39:00 AM
- Deep emotions - touching haiku, Gregory ! - Well written. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Gregory Ramos
Date: 1/26/2014 9:33:00 PM
thank you anne
Date: 1/26/2014 5:08:00 AM
nice flow of emotions, gregory
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Gregory Ramos
Date: 1/26/2014 7:29:00 AM
thank you DR for your review

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