Gregory Ramos Poet Haiku

I Can'T Hear You X 3

cannot feel no more 
 people talking to me loud 
 my cave I’m dwelling 
   
 erupts in my ear 
 dark feels so comfortable 
 the drum blown to bits 
   
 isolation time 
 nothing helps me hear even you 
 retired in my mind

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Anne-Lise Andresen January 26, 2014 at 5:39 AM - Deep emotions - touching haiku, Gregory ! - Well written. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Gregory Ramos January 26, 2014 at 9:33 PM thank you anne

Dr.Ram Mehta January 26, 2014 at 5:08 AM nice flow of emotions, gregory Gregory Ramos January 26, 2014 at 7:29 AM thank you DR for your review