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I cant Breathe

I look at you and I can't breathe I dont understand the way you effect me I'm always feeling an aching need to please you or see your smile I cant believe that its all over so soon It brings tears to my eyes to know that these are our last few days. My soul aches at the thought that I may never see your face or your smile again. No one could ever delight me the way you do You carry an everlasting glow that, hopefully, I will never have to let go of And so I ask myself, " Could this be love?" But I do not know So i keep it bottled up inside And in my writing I will confide until the day I have the courage and knowledge to say exactly what it is I feel for you.

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Date: 8/26/2011 7:27:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poem today, I especially liked the last 8 line, very nicely put together.
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