I Can'T Be Perfect

I CAN'T BE PERFECT..............

with what thought we start our 
life and what it shows,
where is our destination and 
where it goes.....
when all dreams kneel downs in 
front of life's twist,
we can't judge our faith for 
frustration's mist. 

The latent truth of my life is 
that I can't be prefect,
i will end in silence that's the 
real fact.
achievements will laugh 
standing far from my reach,
failure will bite my passion like 
broom witch..

i can't be perfect, i m sure;
in front of others, my talent will 
always remain poor.
they are running in the race 
track to hold their future,
forgetting the pleasure to be the 
king of all creature...

my life only promise me to 
enjoy the best present,
it never believes in future or 
past legends.
it only knows it can't be perfect,
it will end in silence that's the 
real fact
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Karim Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 7:13 PM
I like your Eastern ideas and concepts about living in the present not the past or the future. Many of these Eastern or Asian Indian ideas are quite interesting to me. I live in the present also and not the future, certainly not dwelling on the past. I do admit I have thoughts about past all the time past failures and present fears but lately I much more focus on the(my) present. The present is a gift because you're in it. I can't explain any further.
Jordan Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 7:13 AM
I love your work, Dipankar! :) Amazing yet again! :D ~Destiny
Adams Avatar
September 8, 2013 at 2:55 PM
congrats on your win :)
Chakraborty Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 4:41 AM
thank u
A  Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 9:29 AM
DIPANKAR, yeah, Star Wars Rules:) I agree, I just got stuck with the Star trek contest" Sadly I'm not the oldest one, or else I'd probably would have hosted this one instead. Anyways, I had fun with the Star trek theme LOL, I kid you not. Love ~SKAT~
Morgan Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 11:15 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
Chakraborty Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 4:39 AM
thank u
A   Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 6:08 PM
Hi Dipankar, , stopping by with smiles:-) ;-) CONGRATULATIONS :) on your STAR WARS win.. enjoy my blog "....The Death Star Blues...." when you have time. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15877&PoetID=18720 always & forever *The Lovely Poet Destroyer
Chakraborty Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 4:38 AM
THANK U............ sure i will
Pratap Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 9:44 PM
TRUE ENOUGH GOOD WAY TO EXPRRESS
Chakraborty Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 1:35 AM
Thank U Vinayak....
A   Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 8:32 PM
Dipankar, I very much enjoyed this brilliant piece, , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Chakraborty Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 8:35 PM
Thank U Linda...... I m very much excited and happy after joining this site....... Can I take part in your contest??
Jones Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 10:20 AM
Hello...I enjoyed your poem...no we can't be perfect but we can be honest..and that will make life as good as it gets on earth...enjoying the beauty of each day.....I look forward to reading more of your poems....
Chakraborty Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 10:34 AM
hello.... 1st of all thank U very much... I wrote this poem in my school days. I will post more. Thank U again for reading
A  Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 9:15 AM
Good morning Dipankar, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat *
Chakraborty Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 10:36 AM
Thank U very much Skat for reading the poem... I wrote it in school days .. I will post many more... Thank U again
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