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I Can'T Be Perfect

I CAN'T BE PERFECT.............. with what thought we start our life and what it shows, where is our destination and where it goes..... when all dreams kneel downs in front of life's twist, we can't judge our faith for frustration's mist. The latent truth of my life is that I can't be prefect, i will end in silence that's the real fact. achievements will laugh standing far from my reach, failure will bite my passion like broom witch.. i can't be perfect, i m sure; in front of others, my talent will always remain poor. they are running in the race track to hold their future, forgetting the pleasure to be the king of all creature... my life only promise me to enjoy the best present, it never believes in future or past legends. it only knows it can't be perfect, it will end in silence that's the real fact

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Date: 9/13/2013 7:13:00 PM
I like your Eastern ideas and concepts about living in the present not the past or the future. Many of these Eastern or Asian Indian ideas are quite interesting to me. I live in the present also and not the future, certainly not dwelling on the past. I do admit I have thoughts about past all the time past failures and present fears but lately I much more focus on the(my) present. The present is a gift because you're in it. I can't explain any further.
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Date: 9/13/2013 7:13:00 AM
I love your work, Dipankar! :) Amazing yet again! :D ~Destiny
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Date: 9/8/2013 2:55:00 PM
congrats on your win :)
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Dipankar Chakraborty
Date: 9/13/2013 4:41:00 AM
thank u
Date: 9/6/2013 9:29:00 AM
DIPANKAR, yeah, Star Wars Rules:) I agree, I just got stuck with the Star trek contest" Sadly I'm not the oldest one, or else I'd probably would have hosted this one instead. Anyways, I had fun with the Star trek theme LOL, I kid you not. Love ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/5/2013 11:15:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Dipankar Chakraborty
Date: 9/13/2013 4:39:00 AM
thank u
Date: 9/5/2013 6:08:00 PM
Hi Dipankar, , stopping by with smiles:-) ;-) CONGRATULATIONS :) on your STAR WARS win.. enjoy my blog "....The Death Star Blues...." when you have time. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15877&PoetID=18720 always & forever *The Lovely Poet Destroyer
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Dipankar Chakraborty
Date: 9/13/2013 4:38:00 AM
THANK U............ sure i will
Date: 8/25/2013 9:44:00 PM
TRUE ENOUGH GOOD WAY TO EXPRRESS
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Dipankar Chakraborty
Date: 8/26/2013 1:35:00 AM
Thank U Vinayak....
Date: 8/24/2013 8:32:00 PM
Dipankar, I very much enjoyed this brilliant piece, , thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Dipankar Chakraborty
Date: 8/24/2013 8:35:00 PM
Thank U Linda...... I m very much excited and happy after joining this site....... Can I take part in your contest??
Date: 8/24/2013 10:20:00 AM
Hello...I enjoyed your poem...no we can't be perfect but we can be honest..and that will make life as good as it gets on earth...enjoying the beauty of each day.....I look forward to reading more of your poems....
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Dipankar Chakraborty
Date: 8/24/2013 10:34:00 AM
hello.... 1st of all thank U very much... I wrote this poem in my school days. I will post more. Thank U again for reading
Date: 8/24/2013 9:15:00 AM
Good morning Dipankar, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* Skat *
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Dipankar Chakraborty
Date: 8/24/2013 10:36:00 AM
Thank U very much Skat for reading the poem... I wrote it in school days .. I will post many more... Thank U again

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