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I Cannot Write

I cannot write I've lost the will I feel numb and over the hill Too much sadness, too much grief Can't write anything to give others relief Who must feel feel much worse than I It is not fair it makes me cry

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Date: 10/22/2020 11:16:00 PM
Hi Shirley, We all go through moments when we’re sad. We don’t want to write or anything. Dear poet, when you feel like this way, write because it’s cathartic and therapeutic. The emotion was felt in this write-Alexis
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Date: 10/21/2020 8:54:00 AM
One can feel your Emotions here
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 10/22/2020 9:56:00 PM
So pleased to receive your welcome comment. Life is not fair especially with all the trouble world wide these days. Thank you, Vijay,
Date: 10/15/2020 8:10:00 AM
I feel what you have written, and written well, Shirley. Their is so much sadness, it isn't fair . But I learned long ago, life is not fair.
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 10/16/2020 3:37:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra for your kind comment. Take care ... Shirley
Date: 9/21/2020 11:56:00 AM
So the depths of despair have yet to be reached? Aloha! Rico
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Shirley Hawkins
Date: 9/21/2020 8:45:00 PM
G'Day Rico Sadly No..... Shirley

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